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6/11/2009 8:11 am

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6/26/2009 10:26 am

" I still remember you "

Suddenly a wave shaken my heart,
I looked up,
Oh !!! that is you, at the window,
Looking at me,
I missed my step on the road,
You were laughing loudly,
Still I remember.

I feel a blow of wind, my body catched,
crossing me on the road,you tried to pushed.
Oh !!! this is you,
A whimsical smile on your face.
halted me at the moment,
stabornly,I forget myself,for a while.
still I remember.

one day a rays lighted my room,
someone entering,very slowly,
your perfume,spreading in the air.
Oh !!! its you,
Your delighted face,with full grace,
and your affectionate loving gaze.
Still I remember.

you comes often in my memory,
I didnot understand till now,why?
was I in love,with you,?
or you were in love,
You never told me
I never asked you,
If, you living alone there,
You should know,
I am alone here,
still I remember you,
still I remmber you,
still I remember you.

KUMAR
kumarsambhava
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6/15/2009 5:02 pm

    Quoting Honey69o:
    Hi,kumar sir, A lovely poem,I found myself involve in the vision.thanks with love========== honey
Hi honey690,yoou realy spreaded honey over my poems and made it sweet and healthy,thanks for taking interest....with all love...kumar

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6/15/2009 4:57 pm

    Quoting general_hawks:
    Kumar You are really great,u picked up my lines and made a stanza that too with full sensuality.SO keep it up,

    General_hawks
Thanks General saheb,to take inerest in me,,...with respect and love....kumar

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6/15/2009 4:51 pm

    Quoting Khan76_:
    Very nice, KUMAR Bro. I love your poets. You are so imaginitive, and full of emotion. I really appreciate your
Thanks bro.khanI am honestly tell you that your comment gives me courage to write more...kumar

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6/15/2009 6:33 am

    Quoting general_hawks:
    Kumar sahib lamal kar diya ,Lagta hai Dal me Kusch kala hai ? ya phir dal hi kali hai ???

    Hahahahaha

    Ultimately madam Ruby is eying you ,anyway all the best.

    Now I come to know that 'poems' do attract others than anything else.
General Saheb Jayhind,
Ye to dal hai roj roj pakna hai,dil ka kya hai, ek bar jalana hai,
Dal to phir bhi dal hai doosri bana layenge, dil jala to kahan se layenge,Thanks for comments,and One more thing I didnot know that I having readers like you..I am feeling honoured.welcome to my blog home...with love ...kumar

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6/14/2009 6:02 am

    Quoting swinger726:
    Kumar hi,

    No wards to say,,,,beyond this..

    keep it up
hi,mr,swinger,thanks to encourage me and appreciation, you really gives me courage to do some more...with all love.....kumar

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6/13/2009 5:39 pm

    Quoting Heavenly2009:
    IT'S NICE TO REMEMBER SOMEONE YOU LOVED ....GOOD POEM SAMBHAVA

    ~~Heavenly~~
thanks,heavenly,for comments and visiting my blog.welcome again to my home of blogs...with all love .....kumar

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6/13/2009 5:01 pm

    Quoting ruby_ruby:
    Kumar,

    Thanks a lot for your welcome.Secondly I appreciate your approach in life which seems to be practical.I hope & wish your collection will make a banging effect on media.So keep it up,Any type of help which I can offer ?

    With Love,

    Ruby
Thanks ruby,for your keen interest in my writing and encouragement too.Because I never read romantic poems in english litrature,I wrote some poems in my college days but in Hindi.here in IFF I saw some poetry and and my poet heart wokeup.Thanks for offer me help I wiull sure remember you for this...with love....kumar

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6/13/2009 4:55 pm

    Quoting ruby_ruby:
    Kumar why you are saying it a joke ? I mean it

    As a matter of fact you are looking DASHING in your photo,yes it is.

    I compared other men with you and they all seems to be a pale shadow of yours.So don't say so in future,ok

    Ruby
Ok I believe it now,thanks cor complements...kumar

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6/12/2009 6:02 pm

    Quoting giitchi:
    hi frnd.. aas always you do write a good love poems..always from the heart hun tats good.. sorry l not coming around latey will try n read more .all da best fer you my frnd n take care...

    g
Hi friend,After a long time I had the same eyes peeping from the glass,and reading the heart(It seems).sorry I wont say any thing otherwise again you will fly to sky...with love....kumar

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6/12/2009 5:59 pm

    Quoting ruby_ruby:
    Hello Kumar that is lovely poem but I feel as if I had read it before ,don't remember exactly.By the way have you published some books on poetry ? If Not then must go for that.

    Ek Baat aur,I was thinking that you look great in your photo but now it seems you are Navrattan's of IFF.HAHAHA
Hey ruby,madam why you making joke on me to say NAVRATNA .I am very ordinary man and my language is also poor,I know it you cant make me fool. and thanks about my photograph,I am not photogenic.this photo is not good...thanks again to give title but holy is far from us.....kumar

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6/12/2009 5:53 pm

    Quoting ruby_ruby:
    Hello Kumar it is a good poem but I feel as if I had read it before ,somewhere else .

    Anyway you look great in ur photo and now I have seen in words too.
Hi,ruby First I will greet you welcome to mu home of blogs,thanks for comment .
You are write we discussed it in my office,actually first two stenza have the discriptions which was repeated by few famous poets."looking from window" and " crossing through on rosr"these are the common accidents which happens regularly beween lovers.that why it seems that we read it before.thanks cor pointed it out I need this too much.Because I am preparing to publish my book on love poems but it will take time Iam thinking aboutt hundreds numbers is sufficiet.what do you say...kumar

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6/12/2009 5:46 pm

    Quoting giitchi:
    hi frnd.. aas always you do write a good love poems..always from the heart hun tats good.. sorry l not coming around latey will try n read more .all da best fer you my frnd n take care...

    g
Welcome back giitchi,you always surprised me.comes like a thunder and gone like a flush.both are you part.thanks for decorate my poem..with love ...kumar

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6/12/2009 5:43 pm

    Quoting giitchi:
    knock knock is tis ruby de ajit >???? thow l thought hes gone out from tis world :>:>:>:>
She was in you memory,just click the option friends are there..kumar

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6/12/2009 8:45 am

    Quoting snowAngel2009:
    wowwwwww What a nice vision you created sir, really your immegination is great.I love it nice one thanks
Thanks little snow angel after a long time where you have been in these days..thanks for share...with love kimar

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6/11/2009 8:35 pm

    Quoting Honey69o:
    Hi,kumar sir, A lovely poem,I found myself involve in the vision.thanks with love========== honey
Very very thanks honey dear to read my poem and feels so much involved its my success in writing I will try the best of me...with love kumar

Honey69o
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6/11/2009 8:26 pm

Hi,kumar sir, A lovely poem,I found myself involve in the vision.thanks with love========== honey

kumarsambhava
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6/11/2009 5:12 pm

    Quoting komala55:
    Mr Kumar your poem is awesome.It shows the feeling on both sides, but one thing I can't understand, if she is alone and you are alone why don't both of you make a step towards each other.Better now before it's too late as unsaid words can haunt you for life. A friendly advice, it's time to clear the air between you two... either love or eternal friendship.
Hi,Komala,thanks for comments,this is not necessary that all events is happening with writer,may this is about my some nearest life's incidents,when you will come to my age you will know all the world.with love ...kumar

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6/11/2009 5:08 pm

    Quoting Khan76_:
    Very nice, KUMAR Bro. I love your poets. You are so imaginitive, and full of emotion. I really appreciate your
You love my poet,Dear bro.khan and I love you,thanks bro.to give this respect.I am greatful to you...with love ....kumar

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6/11/2009 1:12 pm

    Quoting Heavenly2009:
    IT'S NICE TO REMEMBER SOMEONE YOU LOVED ....GOOD POEM SAMBHAVA

    ~~Heavenly~~
Yes its nice to remember someone you loved and its also nice to appreciate someones work .Thanks for comments...kumar

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6/11/2009 1:02 pm

    Quoting isabella_:
    Very nice poem kumar. When someone touches your heart deeply, you never forget them.
Nice of you to read my poem.You are respectfuly most welcome to my blogs.thanks for decorate my blogs...kumar

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