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I LOVE YOU
6/11/2009 8:11 am Last Read: |
" I still remember you " Suddenly a wave shaken my heart, I looked up, Oh !!! that is you, at the window, Looking at me, I missed my step on the road, You were laughing loudly, Still I remember. I feel a blow of wind, my body catched, crossing me on the road,you tried to pushed. Oh !!! this is you, A whimsical smile on your face. halted me at the moment, stabornly,I forget myself,for a while. still I remember. one day a rays lighted my room, someone entering,very slowly, your perfume,spreading in the air. Oh !!! its you, Your delighted face,with full grace, and your affectionate loving gaze. Still I remember. you comes often in my memory, I didnot understand till now,why? was I in love,with you,? or you were in love, You never told me I never asked you, If, you living alone there, You should know, I am alone here, still I remember you, still I remmber you, still I remember you. KUMAR |
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6/15/2009 5:02 pm |
Hi,kumar sir, A lovely poem,I found myself involve in the vision.thanks with love========== honey
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6/15/2009 4:57 pm |
Kumar You are really great,u picked up my lines and made a stanza that too with full sensuality.SO keep it up, General_hawks
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6/15/2009 4:51 pm |
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6/15/2009 6:33 am |
Kumar sahib lamal kar diya ,Lagta hai Dal me Kusch kala hai ? ya phir dal hi kali hai ??? Hahahahaha Ultimately madam Ruby is eying you ,anyway all the best. Now I come to know that 'poems' do attract others than anything else. Ye to dal hai roj roj pakna hai,dil ka kya hai, ek bar jalana hai, Dal to phir bhi dal hai doosri bana layenge, dil jala to kahan se layenge,Thanks for comments,and One more thing I didnot know that I having readers like you..I am feeling honoured.welcome to my blog home...with love ...kumar
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6/14/2009 6:02 am |
Kumar hi, No wards to say,,,,beyond this.. keep it up
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6/13/2009 5:39 pm |
IT'S NICE TO REMEMBER SOMEONE YOU LOVED ....GOOD POEM SAMBHAVA ~~Heavenly~~
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6/13/2009 5:01 pm |
Kumar, Thanks a lot for your welcome.Secondly I appreciate your approach in life which seems to be practical.I hope & wish your collection will make a banging effect on media.So keep it up,Any type of help which I can offer ? With Love, Ruby
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6/13/2009 4:55 pm |
Kumar why you are saying it a joke ? I mean it As a matter of fact you are looking DASHING in your photo,yes it is. I compared other men with you and they all seems to be a pale shadow of yours.So don't say so in future,ok Ruby
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6/12/2009 6:02 pm |
hi frnd.. aas always you do write a good love poems..always from the heart hun tats good.. sorry l not coming around latey will try n read more .all da best fer you my frnd n take care...
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6/12/2009 5:59 pm |
Hello Kumar that is lovely poem but I feel as if I had read it before ,don't remember exactly.By the way have you published some books on poetry ? If Not then must go for that. Ek Baat aur,I was thinking that you look great in your photo but now it seems you are Navrattan's of IFF.HAHAHA
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6/12/2009 5:53 pm |
Hello Kumar it is a good poem but I feel as if I had read it before ,somewhere else . Anyway you look great in ur photo and now I have seen in words too. You are write we discussed it in my office,actually first two stenza have the discriptions which was repeated by few famous poets."looking from window" and " crossing through on rosr"these are the common accidents which happens regularly beween lovers.that why it seems that we read it before.thanks cor pointed it out I need this too much.Because I am preparing to publish my book on love poems but it will take time Iam thinking aboutt hundreds numbers is sufficiet.what do you say...kumar
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6/12/2009 5:46 pm |
hi frnd.. aas always you do write a good love poems..always from the heart hun tats good.. sorry l not coming around latey will try n read more .all da best fer you my frnd n take care...
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6/12/2009 5:43 pm |
![]() knock knock is tis ruby de ajit ![]() >???? thow l thought hes gone out from tis world :>:>:>:>
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6/12/2009 8:45 am |
wowwwwww What a nice vision you created sir, really your immegination is great.I love it nice one thanks
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6/11/2009 8:35 pm |
Hi,kumar sir, A lovely poem,I found myself involve in the vision.thanks with love========== honey
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6/11/2009 8:26 pm |
Hi,kumar sir, A lovely poem,I found myself involve in the vision.thanks with love========== honey
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6/11/2009 5:12 pm |
Mr Kumar your poem is awesome.It shows the feeling on both sides, but one thing I can't understand, if she is alone and you are alone why don't both of you make a step towards each other.Better now before it's too late as unsaid words can haunt you for life. A friendly advice, it's time to clear the air between you two... either love or eternal friendship.
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6/11/2009 5:08 pm |
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6/11/2009 1:12 pm |
IT'S NICE TO REMEMBER SOMEONE YOU LOVED ....GOOD POEM SAMBHAVA ~~Heavenly~~
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6/11/2009 1:02 pm |
Very nice poem kumar. When someone touches your heart deeply, you never forget them.
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